Script

*Voice over of girl narrating plays through scenes 1-4* 


Scene 1:
  • Dark lighting, only black silhouette of characters, long shot
  • Father: *incoherent shouting*
  • Girl: *Muffled cries* holds stuffed animals and covers her cried in room behind door
  • Voice over: 
Scene 2:
  • Dark lighting, only black silhouette of characters, long shot
  • Few years later (around 10years old)
  • In drunk fit, father throws beer bottle at child
  • Voice over: 
Scene 3:
  • Dark lighting, only black silhouette of characters, long shot
  • Father: 
Scene 4:
  • Father: *screaming at girl
  • Girl: *screaming back*
Scene 5:
  • Father: *passed out on chair, pills and alcohol surrounding him*
  • Girl: taking pills, drinking smoking
Scene 6:
  • Medium shot, girl looking in mirror, holding pill, thinking to herself...
  • Girl: "We always say we're going to be the ones to break the cycle, to change, to be better"
  • Girl:"...but what if it's too late now? What if I don't want to? What if I just... gave in?"
Scene 7:
  • Music intensifies 
  • Close up shot of girl putting pill on tongue 
  • Extreme close up with girls eyes closed then quick open to dilated eyes
Scene 8:
  • birds-eye view of girl laying in bed with hazed smiling look
  • slow zoom in until a stop and close up of face
  • Girl *softly*: "i get it now"
Scene 9: 
  • numerous shots filtering through girl abusing different kinds of substances on different times very quickly
  • Varied lighting throughout shots but the place stays consistent, the girl in her bedroom
  • Girl taking last line but sees shes emptied her stash  
Scene 10:
  • girl walking in street to go to plug
  • stops mid track when her and guy lock eyes




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